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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Feb 13, 2010 2:04 pm | |
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XxfrozenbutterflyxX Treasure
Number of posts : 6329 Location : World of Glass Humor : Cry With A Smile :`) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica,Tristania & Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2009-03-06
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:14 pm | |
| That's really impressive | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:23 pm | |
| Thanks Cris and Tay
The Man With Two Voices
Do it, Come On, Do It No, I Can't It's Wrong Oh I See So You Going To Let This Guy Live After What He Did To You Shut Up, I Know What He Did But It Does'nt Have To End Like This Yes It Does, Do It, All Your Pain Will Go Away No It Won't, I Don't Believe You Do It, DO IT NO! DO IT, DO IT, DO IT Okay! (Guys this a well thought out poem i don't know if you'll be able to understand its meaning but i hope you do) | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:53 pm | |
| Mental health issues! I get it. I like it | |
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Horrible Histories The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4488 Age : 28 Location : Arbeia Humor : Rattus Rattus Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Draconian, Within Temptation, Closterkeller Your Band Name : Hachi Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-03
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:37 am | |
| Wow really great well done | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Tue Feb 16, 2010 6:04 pm | |
| Life(V.2) Life is like a deck of cards, Its all about luck In Life you make choices, Choices are like a coin its all about chance Is Life Fair, Only time will tell But everything that happens all boils down to one person YOU! It's your life, its up to you what to do with it. | |
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Horrible Histories The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4488 Age : 28 Location : Arbeia Humor : Rattus Rattus Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Draconian, Within Temptation, Closterkeller Your Band Name : Hachi Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-03
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:38 am | |
| I love it , your poems are about truth and I adore, because now most poets lie but you tell people as it is. I adore your work | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:49 am | |
| Really awsome, and very clever. The man with two voices, is it about a skitzophrenic (I can't spell) who's talking himself into suicide? | |
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Horrible Histories The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4488 Age : 28 Location : Arbeia Humor : Rattus Rattus Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Draconian, Within Temptation, Closterkeller Your Band Name : Hachi Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-03
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:09 am | |
| To me the poem seems like someone's conscience telling the person to kill the person that harmed them I think | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:54 am | |
| Ah, I see... Well, different enterpretations are a sign of good poetry, there should always be some mystery in it | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:37 pm | |
| Tayla this isn't you, whats wrong | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Thu Mar 04, 2010 4:55 pm | |
| Humans Us Humans, Were an interesting species We always find a way to survive but at what cost We survive but others species suffer We take without asking We fight for the smallest piece of land We destroy thoughs who conspire against us Our greed knows no bonds We are a plague that is killing our world but we will do anything to survive and I mean ANYTHING! | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:38 pm | |
| Great work The time thing is really interesting, though Linear Universe theory suggests that time is actually a circle, and Einstein's theory of relativity dictates that the earth's rotation coupled with it's rotation around the sun, the sun's rotation around the only known Supermassive Black hole and the hole's (Possible) rotation around the origin point of the universe means that time is actually a fucked up squiggle of a circle more than a straight line. Just so you know | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:19 pm | |
| Thanks, I Think, What you just said was confusing | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:56 pm | |
| Yeah, it takes a while to get the noggin around it But the poem is really good though, you should be proud | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:35 pm | |
| Like I said in Math I love it, and it's pretty true! | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:13 pm | |
| Human Nature Our Human Nature, We Conquer We Survive We Destroy Your Human Nature You Love You Lust You Lie My Human Nature I Live I Cry I Die | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Mar 13, 2010 4:08 pm | |
| Very interesting, as usual. Though I don't believe in Human Nature (Environmental factors have been proven far more influential in the development of a personality) it's an awsome idea for a poem, I like the short lines. | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sun Mar 28, 2010 9:38 am | |
| The Tears of a Fallen Angel Her tears are of blood Her tears are of fire Her Tears are of smoke She weaps for her heart, in the hope of a second chance One hand reaches out She slaps it away, not knowing what she has done He cries in the darkest reaches of her forgotten soul Fading away as the spirt of time walks on without her leaving her weaping body to rot Her wings burn and fade away with her innocence She remains as a weaping angel forever She has FALLEN | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Tue Apr 06, 2010 7:40 pm | |
| The Forgotten You may have forgotten about him but he remembers you!
Chapter One: The End of a Life
“No no, get away”. Tossing and turning in my bed like a simple farm animal “Ahh”. Another bad dream, the same I've had for the past five nights. The same horrible nightmare, the dark moonlit night drenched in the blood of my loved ones. The nightmare starts off like a normal dream, me surrounded by the people I love everyone cheering and happy. Then things start to to turn into a nightmare,masked men dressed in dark hooded cloaks chaining up my family as if they were slaves to their sick desires. The men for some reason leave me alone to watch in fear as they brought each one of my loved ones in front of me making me tell them everything will be okay when I know it will not. “Bang”. One bullet for each of my family, blood drenching my face I'm screaming at the men telling them to take me instead but they continued without remorse. Then after all my family are dead, the man that pulled the trigger of the gun kneels in front of me, I scream in his face “I'll kill you, you bastard”. The man hidden under his mask starts to laugh as if he he is proud of what he has done. He grabs my face looking at me with a dark aura surrounding him “So, you would be willing to take a life, even if it is yours”. I look at him with a shocked look upon my face “ What are you talking about you sick twisted son of a bitch”. He laughs and begins to take off his mask slowly teasing me to find out his identity, the man's face still hidden by his dark hood. He looks up and at the same time takes his hood down revealing his face. My eyes fill with tears trying to deny the face that stood in front of me, the monster that killed my family in blind of ill gotten rage was me. It was my my face looking at me. I looked on the dark figure of me spoke “Well, what's wrong it looks like you've seen a ghost”. Then I wake up sweating with fear of how I would have these sick twisted dreams of killing my family and the people I care most about. I get out of my bed with the mood not to wake up my little brother, my nightmares still bothering my thoughts. I look at my brother thinking my would I dream of killing such a sweet and innocent child. I walk out of the room and towards the bathroom, I reach the bathroom sink and watch as the bowl fills up with cold refreshing water, as I pick up a water with the my hands. “Splash”.My hands shook with a fiery rage, stopping myself from picking up what could be weapon, I regain my composer and wash my face breathing heavily as if I had just raced a marathon. The mirror fogged up as if I had just been getting out of the shower, I wrap the fog off I see the face of a killer, the same face I see in my nightmares I shake my head and then see the normal face which I have come to get use too over the years. It was still dark outside, I needed at least a couple of hours of sleep I walked over to the room in which I had my terrible dreams “Well I have to sleep sometime, better start now”. I lay down in my bed,my head resting on my soft pillow. My eyes close with the hope I don't see that horrid face again even if it was mine. | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:40 pm | |
| Diversity Diversity comes in many forms, causes arguements, such as are we natures way of a perfect evolution or are someone else's creation Causes Wars between countries only due to one little flaw with eachother We have survived all these decades and centeries by being different Some people might think Diversity makes us weak but it is our differences that make us strong. | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:46 pm | |
| Wow, I like it It's pretty deep and it's got a nice message to it. | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Thu Jul 01, 2010 10:44 am | |
| Music Music is, well its hard to explain Some people think its just words slapped together and played across the world But its more then that, Music bonds people that have never met One song can connect us all some people believe in god but some people believe in music some people pray but some people turn up the radio Music is a gift from does who can give it to us most people cradle that gift and try and turn into our own one thing is for certain Music is the true Immortal becuase it will never die | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Fri Jul 02, 2010 1:43 pm | |
| That's really interesting and elequant as always Ryan And very true. | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories Thu Jul 22, 2010 7:06 pm | |
| I shall think this will be my last poem,
Tormented Spirt I Bare This Face, This Body, For No Reason My Heart Is Tearing Itself To Shreds Yet My Body Keeps Going It Does Not Want To Give Up The Fight But I Do
I Take My Limp Body To Woods To End It All As I Pull The Gun Closer and Closer I Hear The Sound Of Thunder Then Water From The Heavens, Rains Down Apon Me
Then I Feel At Peace, Every Drop Of Rain Washing Away The Fear, The Doubt, The Urge To Die Now I See Well My Body Never Gave Up It Was Because It Wanted To Save Me
Maybe, Just Maybe It Was'nt To Late, Maybe It Was Just Beginning. | |
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