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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:56 pm

I really like it Smile I love how original your works are, like usually I'd say this was someone who didn't want to be single, but it's a completely different meaning... And the others are about concepts and ideas rather than you yourself. It's proper intelligent poetry.

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Nov 07, 2009 8:03 pm

Thanks Todd and Liz and Tayla
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:16 pm

I walk in the shadow's, unseen by others
My skin as cold as Ice, my heart does not beat
and let i live forever
I take the lives of the innocent to substain mine
Is it right, no one knows
my brothers say its the right thing to do
but i have my doubts
I walk in the shadows for all time
watching as humanity cumbles to the ground
The urges become stronger at every passing moment
I must leave now, i afaird its time to feed.
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:32 pm

Your lyrics are really good =)
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:31 am

Awsome Smile I presume it's about a vampire?

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:40 am

AWSOME I would of thought it was about a vampire too Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:57 am

I also think that it's about one Vamp or????
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:50 am

Yes, it is about a Vampire
i didn't give it a title becuase i wanted to see if you guys could guess
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Mon Nov 09, 2009 6:44 pm

The Earth

Our World is crying, she is weeping
We stand by and let her cry as if she is just a play thing
She cries as her forests are torn from there roots
She cries as her crystal blue seas are turned to green waste pools
She watches as our unity is burnt by the fire of war
Her gentle nature turnt to hurt and fury
Her love and comparsion ignored by the wicked
Only a few of us stand up to maintain her beauty but the rest shame us for it
But What does people do not realise
Her kind nature will soon run out
And when that happens, we all shall pay the price
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Mon Nov 09, 2009 6:47 pm

My mother earth in love Leave her be!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Mon Nov 09, 2009 6:50 pm

WOW that may be your best to date WOW it is EPIC
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Nov 14, 2009 1:21 pm

War

War is a ever ending fight
War is a fire that burns for all eternity
A fire that tears us apart
War is meant to save lives
but at what cost, the tears of the fallens familys
We are lied to by our leaders
They Tell us that War will bring peace
These men send the young and innocent to there deaths
What do they now about Peace
It's not about peace, it's about hate, hate that fuels the fire of war
War is a machine, that we built
and soon we will all be consumed by the fire of
WAR.
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Nov 14, 2009 1:25 pm

Seriously your poems are getting greater and greater as you go along I love how your poems are about truth and not lies what some people do who are famous and are proper poets, some poets lie about war and the earth but you tell the truth like a real poet Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Nov 14, 2009 1:26 pm

Thanks Liz Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Nov 14, 2009 1:53 pm

Wow, I love it. It's about real things, like Liz said, and really clever in the way it's delivered.

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Nov 14, 2009 1:55 pm

Thanks Todd Thumbs up
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:37 pm

Friends

Friends are the people you count on
Friends are the people that pick you up when you fall
Friends stand by you, when your in trouble
Friends warm up your day with a smile
Friends make you feel safe
Friends make you feel like yourself
Friends help you laugh even when your in pain
Friendship can be a bond that lasts forever
In Our Hearts
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:40 pm

D'aaawwwww Glomp

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Fri Feb 05, 2010 9:25 pm

Government

The Truth Is Always A Lie

(short and sweet)
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:53 am

^ I love that
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Feb 06, 2010 9:55 am

XD that is ep Ryan Razz (ep is a short way of saying epic)
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:21 am

Awsome ^-^ The friends one is really sweet, and the goverment one is just epic.

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:31 pm

Thanks Guys
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:38 pm

The Government one is so true, just love it.
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Feb 13, 2010 2:00 pm

The Four Elements

Fire, Water, Wind, Earth
Wind Blows
Fire Burns
Water Flows
Earth Shakes
There's a Balance
The Four Elements Cancel Eachother Out To Keep Peace
There The Four Things Us Humans Cannot Control
Yet We Still Try
They Are The Four Untamed Forces, Forever Free
Fire, Water, Wind, Earth
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