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Enigma
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PostSubject: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Fri Oct 09, 2009 6:24 pm

Death

Death It's Just A Word
But This One Word Can Cause So Much Pain
This One Word Leaves Misery In Its Wake
It Makes The Mightiest Warriors Fall
It Makes The Most Beautiful Roses Weep
But Why Is This Word So Powerful
Well My Friends I Shall Tell You
This One Word Means
The End!
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Fri Oct 09, 2009 6:28 pm

Wow, very nice. Totally deep, and a nice exploration of... um... death.

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Fri Oct 09, 2009 6:29 pm

Nice one!! *high fives*

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Fri Oct 09, 2009 6:31 pm

cool Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:03 pm

Rest In Peace

My Heart Is Torn, And Your The One To Blame
You Were Taken From This World
When You Had So Much To Do
You Have Left Many Lifes Ruined
You Have Caused Misery ThroughOut My Soul
But Do Not Blame Yourself
We Have Forgiven You
So Please For All Of Us
Rest In Peace!

(I visited a graveyard today so i write this poem, Death I write about five weeks ago but ever shown anyone)
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:33 am

Cross my heart and hope to die you can write really good poems.

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Oct 10, 2009 1:21 pm

Really, Thanks Tayla

End Of The World

The Sun Is Falling, The End Is Coming
Panic Takes Over In People's Hearts
Your True Nature Is Revealed To Those Closest Too You
You Try To Run But It Is No Use
Your Fate Is Set In Stone
It's Time To Confess To Your Sin's Because
It's the End Of The World

(I dont think this is as good as my others but i fought about if the world is going to end in 2012 what would it be like)
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:44 am

Really deep and emotional poems. You're good. I really like them =)
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:28 pm

I love that one! It's epic!

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:32 pm

Life

You Start With One
You End With One
It Is A Gift Not A Right
You Make Chooses Good And Bad
It Is A Journey You Must Take Alone
It Can Start At Any Time But Can End Any Time Just As Quickly
You Only Have One, So Don't Waste It.
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Tue Oct 13, 2009 4:04 pm

Awesomesauciness. Love it.

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Thu Oct 15, 2009 7:15 am

This is a six word story

You Live, You Die, That's It
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Thu Oct 15, 2009 7:19 am

Pretty damn great stuff you got here, some of it seriosly genious.
Well done!
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:14 am

The lyrics are pretty good =)
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Oct 17, 2009 3:52 pm

Lies

Everyone Lies To Each other,
You Cannot Deny It
Everyone Will Lie To Make Themself Look Cooler In Front Of There Friends
Or To Get A Cheap Thrill
Anyone Would Lie To There Parents To Skip Certain Things
You Would Lie To Your Friends To Get Something You Want
You Would Betray Your Own Brother For Acceptance
But When You Do These Things
You Don't Betray Those Closest To You
Oh No, You Betray Yourself.
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Oct 17, 2009 3:59 pm

That's really good , and true
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:38 pm


This is just another five minute thing
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:45 pm

Time

Time, is a strange thing, no one know it started
or how it is going to end
Time is a straight line, there is no turning back
Only memories of what happened
Everyone has a fixed amount of time
But no one knows when there time is up
That is what most people fear
to run out of time
While i have been writing this poem
another three minutes of that time is gone
Another three minutes towards the end of everything.

(i thought it was time i write another poem and here it is, i hope you guys like it)
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:47 pm

I love the banner thing and the poem.

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:49 pm

Thanks, Tayla
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Oct 31, 2009 1:08 pm

Ohmigosh I love the poem especially this bit
Quote :
While i have been writing this poem
another three minutes of that time is gone
Another three minutes towards the end of everything.

I love the banner too Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Oct 31, 2009 2:59 pm

I like the poem, it's really intersting. And the poster is cool too.

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:47 pm

Alone

I Sit Here, watching waiting
Waiting for a safe passage home, for another kindred spirt
Watching as the days turn into nights, as the summer becomes the winter
I sit here dreaming
Dreaming of that safe haven called home
I've sat here for an eternity
An eternity that i have spent
ALONE

(i write this while i was waiting for my dad to pick me up from school, i was all alone in the school car park)
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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:51 pm

Very Happy I've already seen it and I love it.

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PostSubject: Re: Enigma's Poems/Stories   Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:23 pm

Wow Ryan that is great very deep Smile
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