Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...

I over use the smudge tool Thanks

I love yours warped graphics! It looks like from movie "Grudge"!!!
Very nice

Thanks so much Ena!

Ok, I'm back writing. Can't stop for long.

Sweet Bitterness

I give a gift
A cup of my love
I dance around you
Enchanting your will
You will not take my hand
The rain it falls on my hand

The raven he came to me
He whispered the memories so sweetly
He took you in his wings
He stole you from me
Will you come back to me?
Will you hold my hand?

Grey clouds gather
Cast down demon from lips of sin
A poison arrow
Through my chest
You aren't coming back
My black heart bleeds

All of tears
This sweet bitterness
There is nothing I can do
All of this time
You would not take my hand
Swirls of snow gather around

The forest is calling me
It was written on the stone
The foretold future
I give you all my love
You will not see it
Let my black heart bleed

Whisper sweet times to me
Let rain wash away the pain
You aren't coming back
Let my black heart bleed...

Amazing. Very, very saddening, but amazing.

Thanks.

That is really good, sad yeah, but getting emotion to what you are writing is the most important thing, we all cant do that

Beautiful lyrics Tayla

Thanks Eetu and Ena!!

New Closterkeller set;

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great! I love the text, and it's a nice effect that you put the split thing in. The advice I can give is that you put a featherbetween the two images on the right hand section. Still, great choice of images and a lovely font.

Really good work again, you are improving on every set you do!

Thanks guys!!

Nice ......

Thanks Ena.

Now I have GIMP you should be getting more stuff more often Or just about when I have the time

Monster

The voice that whispered in my head
Told me to commit the deed
My inner demons have taken control
Can't carry on anymore

I didn't wish for it to end this way
Forgive me
For I cannot forgive myself
Make me cry
Make me burn
For I caused you pain
Shout at me
Torture me
Make me pay for sins of mine

The devilish deeds I have committed
By the monster within me
I proclaim my heart black
And dead
Withered and burnt to ash
Take it away

Hurt me
Break me
I broke you
It's what I deserve
I can't carry on this way
What have I done?
I do not deserve this life
Be rid of me

All is amazing Tayla!

Well done, the idea of it just doesnt feel good to me

More stuff on the way.

End Of All

What have I done to deserve this pain?
What is there to gain from these games?
You say you can not take the blame
I say I can no longer withstand the pain
And yet I still stay and wither in my agony
And yet you continue to treat me this way
Winter's have come and bitten my heart
I can no longer love for love isn't love
When you aren't in the equation
And I've had enough it's finally time
For me to let go of what I did and have done
To walk on my own way
I gave and gave
You take and take
Take my agony
Take my pain
Take my love
And rape my soul again
The foot of the candle's birth now glimmers a stirring red
The sky is now scarlet with the bloodwash
Your four walls are closing in
You beg for another chance
And at the same time prey for death
I only have one thing left to give
And you will never earn my forgiveness
You believe I can not live in a world without you
I believe the same is for you
I am sorry, well and truly
The rave of the broken dusk continues to beat
The same haunting rythm
Wind blows, howling and biting
Take my cold heart
Take all my warm
Take my sanity
Rape my soul again
Let my black heart bleed
The beating heart in me has stopped
I continue to breath but live I will no longer
The end of all for me is here
Standing are seven doors with only 5 five keys
I choose the furtherest
Believe I am gone
The sky cries blood and mourns the piteous souls
My fate is sealed and my kisses are gone
Feel the cold breath of my skin once more
Take me or leave me
Take my heart and break it
Take my lies
Rape my soul again

Now some graphics.

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Wow, these are incredible, you're improving dramatically!

That was using version 2.0 of photoshop on the computers at school

Thanks.

Tayla,you are an extremly talented writer.Love your poems althought I haven`t read them all I`m gonna do it as soon as possible.And your artwork is lovely <3