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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Feb 09, 2009 5:28 pm | |
| I hope you didn't mean that one, it sounds realy sad...
But it's very, very good and very emotional. | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Feb 09, 2009 5:31 pm | |
| Todd you don't know everything about me. I'm sorry but I have to say most of that is truth from my heart.
thanks for all your kind comments. | |
| | | Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Feb 09, 2009 5:38 pm | |
| Oh no, it sounds like you're going through a tough time. I hope you can manage to pull through it, and I hope you aren't going to overdose. | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Feb 09, 2009 5:39 pm | |
| I promise. most can't see the reason for suicide in this one of that I'm glad. Now to wander off and not reveal meanings. | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Feb 17, 2009 6:47 pm | |
| What remains unjustified
Pale hands held up to pale faces Hiding all in sworn secrecy A single tears rolls down a single face Denying all that is real The end of a day and the end of another innocent life dawns Still all goes unnoticed Blind eyes co-excist with blind minds Oblivious to the obvious
Mutliated, violated Physical torture Batterred, bruised Suffering at fate's unforgiving hand
Mindless deeds performed by mindless abusers Look into those scared eyes is all this justified? Scarred boddies mirror scarred hearts Tell me he reasons why Lies i those eyes, lies in your eyes Decietful, to all that was true
Destroyed, crushed Mentally abused Twisted, broken Sick in the mind, dead in the heart
Why is the reasons so plain to see? Yet you fail to believe me You have done this for your own pleasure Now I hope you suffer
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| | | EnaGothic Countess Of Midnight
Number of posts : 4752 Age : 592 Location : Dracula's Castle Humor : Bwahahaha Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Nightwish Member Points : Registration date : 2009-01-02
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:58 pm | |
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| | | Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:32 pm | |
| Wow... very deep. I love it.
Just one tiny thing, you spelt "now" wrong on the last line. | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:59 pm | |
| Bugger!! Now I have change it. Thanks anyways Todd and Ena | |
| | | Universe The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4460 Age : 30 Location : Finland Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica, Mandragora Scream, In Silentio Noctis, Amaranthe, 2 Times Terror, HB, UnSun, Eilera, Darzamat, Kivimetsän Druidi, Villieläin, Depressed Mode Your Band Name : EneUniverse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed Feb 18, 2009 4:54 pm | |
| That is great, as usually, i have so far loved all stuff you have written =) | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed Feb 18, 2009 5:36 pm | |
| Thanks very much. | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:51 pm | |
| Gawd!! I'm going to upload all of my poems soon I have a few | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:59 pm | |
| A Whisper In The Wind
I hear your whispers break the silence An old story of old tongues The words haunt my mind I see that black glint in your eye I see what you are inside
Last edited by Lady Draconian on Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:03 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
| | | Universe The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4460 Age : 30 Location : Finland Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica, Mandragora Scream, In Silentio Noctis, Amaranthe, 2 Times Terror, HB, UnSun, Eilera, Darzamat, Kivimetsän Druidi, Villieläin, Depressed Mode Your Band Name : EneUniverse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:02 pm | |
| That's really good, short but interesting | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:03 pm | |
| Hehe, it's not finished at least I don't think so hehehe | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:23 pm | |
| This one is really dark so be warned.
Save Me From Myself
Take my hand I'm sinking I'm reaching out for you I refuse to face the facts That I cannot escape So I pray for life, for you
The bread no longer satisfys the hunger The water can't quench the thirst I'm dieing here a little more each day Shadowed by my blackened memory Screaming for a release; Set me free!
The future is uncertain Will I die in the end? Or will I survive the fight for life? Will we stay until time comes to an end?
The truth between the lines remains unclear So I wait patiently For all the love we've had, Please I beg of you, set me free...
Is this my destiny? Can I find the will within me? I've searched for the truth a thousand times I do not understand
Is there a place where my wish will be granted? Have I over stepped the borderline? Was I left behind? I'm here searching for the truth
I shall stay here, where day and night unite In the corridors of my mind A long neverending lane to insanity
A vioce whispers in my mind; "The time has come, this is the final end"
I kiss you one final time I am sorry you were too late I have failed you
Falling through the black abyss I know all hope is gone The time has come This is the final end | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:25 pm | |
| You must all know I plan to write know more after this day, if I do however come back to writing again, you'll all get the first pieces | |
| | | Universe The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4460 Age : 30 Location : Finland Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica, Mandragora Scream, In Silentio Noctis, Amaranthe, 2 Times Terror, HB, UnSun, Eilera, Darzamat, Kivimetsän Druidi, Villieläin, Depressed Mode Your Band Name : EneUniverse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:41 pm | |
| Ooh, i love that, love the Epica quotes . You are amazing at writing, one of the best's i know! Keep 'em coming, i insist! lol | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:44 pm | |
| Epica quotes? Oh, that must be why the words were stuck in my head now I remember Stupid here! | |
| | | Universe The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4460 Age : 30 Location : Finland Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica, Mandragora Scream, In Silentio Noctis, Amaranthe, 2 Times Terror, HB, UnSun, Eilera, Darzamat, Kivimetsän Druidi, Villieläin, Depressed Mode Your Band Name : EneUniverse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:47 pm | |
| Hehe, if i'm right the first two are from Chasing the Dragon, that happens to me too all the time lol | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Mar 06, 2009 5:31 pm | |
| ^^ The first 2 are from Death Of A Dream I think Now I'll post some warped graphics I made... | |
| | | Universe The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4460 Age : 30 Location : Finland Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica, Mandragora Scream, In Silentio Noctis, Amaranthe, 2 Times Terror, HB, UnSun, Eilera, Darzamat, Kivimetsän Druidi, Villieläin, Depressed Mode Your Band Name : EneUniverse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Mar 06, 2009 5:33 pm | |
| Damn, yes they are, all amazing though | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Mar 06, 2009 5:36 pm | |
| Anja - Queen avatar Anja - avatar Anja - sig Warped graphic; 1024 version https://i.servimg.com/u/f82/12/42/71/01/graphi11.jpg Eye in the sunset; 1024 version https://i.servimg.com/u/f82/12/42/71/01/sunset11.jpg | |
| | | Universe The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4460 Age : 30 Location : Finland Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica, Mandragora Scream, In Silentio Noctis, Amaranthe, 2 Times Terror, HB, UnSun, Eilera, Darzamat, Kivimetsän Druidi, Villieläin, Depressed Mode Your Band Name : EneUniverse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Mar 06, 2009 5:40 pm | |
| Wow, really cool stuff! Well done | |
| | | Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Mar 06, 2009 5:42 pm | |
| Hehe, thanks. I did them and some kid in my class was like what the fuck at the "warped graphic". | |
| | | Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:56 pm | |
| Wow, fantastic. I genuinely missed these poems. The warped graphics are great, it's hard to get the smudge tool to look nice. | |
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