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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Wed May 19, 2010 7:26 pm

You are so amazing and talented cuddlebug <333333333
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Wed May 19, 2010 7:38 pm

WOW, Tayla those are amazing <3
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri May 21, 2010 2:31 pm

Tayla, that's really beutifull, but so sad...

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri May 21, 2010 6:10 pm

Thankyou all darlings <3

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:31 am

Couldn't think of a title for this one:

Another day has gone away
It's so cold, so cold
I can't feel my heart beat
Only hearing the words in my head
The voice screaming and scratching
Sharp words, wanting to escape
Once more I'm living inside my head
Trying to blot away reality as it slips from me
I wish, oh how I wish...
I couldn't feel at all

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Sun Jun 20, 2010 5:27 pm

That's truly beautifull, and also heart breakingly tagic.

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:22 pm

In A Moment

With my head held high
I fall from the sky
Hold my breath
Count to five

Falling into the warm black haze
Maybe like you, I'll fade one day
Fallen among the ruins
I stay here and wait for the dawn

Frantic, searching, wanting for change
I'm running through the cold walls
Wanting for a sun that hasn't come
In a year, maybe a day or two

One, two
Where are you? I scream your name.
Three, four
Opening realities doors
Five
Am I alive? I'm begging fate for just...

Just one sign.

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:30 pm

Oh wow those are so so so so so AMAZING!!!!!! <3
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:35 pm

Thanks <3

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:35 pm

Truly, truly beautiful Smile And the sentence structure is really interesting too.

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:35 am

Wow, your poems really speak out... I dabble in poetry a little myself, and I have to say your style of writing is amazing!

"In a Moment" was particularily good, I really liked the part where the numbers were counting down...

Thanks for sharing! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:36 am

Thankyou very much my dear <3 Your words mean alot to me!

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:53 am

Emotion Denied

I have no desires to love or be loved
All consumed by the dark vortex within
I'm learning to resit all emotion at all
Fear, hate, love, happiness
Slowly becoming cold and numb

I can't explain.. what you do to me
That your voice puts my head in a spin
I won't deny that.. but I'll deny myself of you

I have no desires eating at my heart
So pale and frozen, numb I'm falling awake

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:20 am

very dark but it has a certain feel to it, i like it
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:23 am

Razz thanks Ryan, I wrote it sometime ago and decided to post it up Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:20 am

Oooh, me likes!
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:32 am

Dark and neat. I like the feeling it creates after reading it.
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:40 am

Thanks Marit and Liz <33

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:59 pm

Head In A Spin

Love pure like snow, tainted black with past
She wants it all, head in a spin it's moving too fast
Up on a stage, the object of her desire
In her eyes determination, blazes like fire

Let me, let me live to love
Let me live to have it all

She prays to her Gods above
Awaiting the deepest inner fall

Hand on her heart fight deception and greed
She is consumed by hate,regret and need
Hoping for her love to be returned
All and nothing the inner poet has earned

The flame of desire is hosed by the water memory
In vain,in glory hidden deep a dark story
Up on a stage, the object of her desire
In her eyes determination, blazes like fire




Credits to Beau for the title and Jim for the inspiration to write this Very Happy



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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:52 am

WOW!!! This is awesome!!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:08 am

WOW!!! that is very likely to be you best yet, Well done Tayla Clapping
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:09 am

Thankies both of you! Very Happy Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:15 am

Absolutely fantastic Very Happy Really, your best work yet, it has a real rhythm to it and the ryming couplets work really well. I can imagine this being turned into a song Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Mon Sep 13, 2010 5:04 pm

Face The Wall Of It All

An autumn shadow crawls before you
Summer walks about the door
Futi amu dakas uma
I face the wall of it all

Hynima duma gevechi
Wish I could take back all I said
Ille dacku fatima shivus
It will only break me to my knees

I face the wall of it all
I'm standing tall, yet am so small
I cave in on myself and see only dark
Nothing to give to you, to show my adorations

A painting in my mind
Fading, hilma, fading, hilma
But your face stays
Remains the same

I face the wall of it all
Only wish I could let you in
Miya'rui dwach luminis
For my heart is bitter, nothing

Red rimmed eyes
A psychical disguise
Gretch ma hitchi
Be free from me

I face the wall of it all
Listening for your call
Sweet, sweet words echo
Drowned in my sea

A sea of echoes

And I close my eyes, facing the wall of it all

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:01 pm

Really great lyrics Very Happy
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