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FallenHalos Lost
Number of posts : 27 Age : 29 Location : Illinois Humor : Dead Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2010-02-04
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed May 19, 2010 7:26 pm | |
| You are so amazing and talented cuddlebug <333333333 | |
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Horrible Histories The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4488 Age : 28 Location : Arbeia Humor : Rattus Rattus Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Draconian, Within Temptation, Closterkeller Your Band Name : Hachi Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-03
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed May 19, 2010 7:38 pm | |
| WOW, Tayla those are amazing <3 | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri May 21, 2010 2:31 pm | |
| Tayla, that's really beutifull, but so sad... | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri May 21, 2010 6:10 pm | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:31 am | |
| Couldn't think of a title for this one:
Another day has gone away It's so cold, so cold I can't feel my heart beat Only hearing the words in my head The voice screaming and scratching Sharp words, wanting to escape Once more I'm living inside my head Trying to blot away reality as it slips from me I wish, oh how I wish... I couldn't feel at all | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Sun Jun 20, 2010 5:27 pm | |
| That's truly beautifull, and also heart breakingly tagic. | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:22 pm | |
| In A Moment
With my head held high I fall from the sky Hold my breath Count to five
Falling into the warm black haze Maybe like you, I'll fade one day Fallen among the ruins I stay here and wait for the dawn
Frantic, searching, wanting for change I'm running through the cold walls Wanting for a sun that hasn't come In a year, maybe a day or two
One, two Where are you? I scream your name. Three, four Opening realities doors Five Am I alive? I'm begging fate for just...
Just one sign. | |
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Horrible Histories The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4488 Age : 28 Location : Arbeia Humor : Rattus Rattus Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Draconian, Within Temptation, Closterkeller Your Band Name : Hachi Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-03
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:30 pm | |
| Oh wow those are so so so so so AMAZING!!!!!! <3 | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:35 pm | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:35 pm | |
| Truly, truly beautiful And the sentence structure is really interesting too. | |
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Tyranna Lost
Number of posts : 10 Age : 30 Location : England Humor : Dark humour. Liking the old comedies too! Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2010-02-04
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:35 am | |
| Wow, your poems really speak out... I dabble in poetry a little myself, and I have to say your style of writing is amazing!
"In a Moment" was particularily good, I really liked the part where the numbers were counting down...
Thanks for sharing! ^^ | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:36 am | |
| Thankyou very much my dear <3 Your words mean alot to me! | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:53 am | |
| Emotion Denied
I have no desires to love or be loved All consumed by the dark vortex within I'm learning to resit all emotion at all Fear, hate, love, happiness Slowly becoming cold and numb
I can't explain.. what you do to me That your voice puts my head in a spin I won't deny that.. but I'll deny myself of you
I have no desires eating at my heart So pale and frozen, numb I'm falling awake | |
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Enigma The Escapist
Number of posts : 1495 Age : 30 Location : Where I'm Needed Humor : He he he, Why So Serious? Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Within Temptation and Delain Your Band Name : If i had a good pair of lungs and a band. I suppose we would be called Devils Hand Member Points : Registration date : 2009-06-16
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:20 am | |
| very dark but it has a certain feel to it, i like it | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
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Horrible Histories The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4488 Age : 28 Location : Arbeia Humor : Rattus Rattus Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Draconian, Within Temptation, Closterkeller Your Band Name : Hachi Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-03
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:20 am | |
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Marit The Escapist
Number of posts : 1040 Age : 30 Location : Estonia Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Nightwish, Epica Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-11
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:32 am | |
| Dark and neat. I like the feeling it creates after reading it. | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:40 am | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:59 pm | |
| Head In A SpinLove pure like snow, tainted black with past She wants it all, head in a spin it's moving too fast Up on a stage, the object of her desire In her eyes determination, blazes like fire Let me, let me live to love Let me live to have it allShe prays to her Gods above Awaiting the deepest inner fall Hand on her heart fight deception and greed She is consumed by hate,regret and need Hoping for her love to be returned All and nothing the inner poet has earned The flame of desire is hosed by the water memory In vain,in glory hidden deep a dark story Up on a stage, the object of her desire In her eyes determination, blazes like fire Credits to Beau for the title and Jim for the inspiration to write this | |
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Marit The Escapist
Number of posts : 1040 Age : 30 Location : Estonia Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Nightwish, Epica Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-11
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:52 am | |
| WOW!!! This is awesome!!! | |
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Horrible Histories The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4488 Age : 28 Location : Arbeia Humor : Rattus Rattus Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Draconian, Within Temptation, Closterkeller Your Band Name : Hachi Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-03
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:08 am | |
| WOW!!! that is very likely to be you best yet, Well done Tayla | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:15 am | |
| Absolutely fantastic Really, your best work yet, it has a real rhythm to it and the ryming couplets work really well. I can imagine this being turned into a song | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Sep 13, 2010 5:04 pm | |
| Face The Wall Of It All
An autumn shadow crawls before you Summer walks about the door Futi amu dakas uma I face the wall of it all
Hynima duma gevechi Wish I could take back all I said Ille dacku fatima shivus It will only break me to my knees
I face the wall of it all I'm standing tall, yet am so small I cave in on myself and see only dark Nothing to give to you, to show my adorations
A painting in my mind Fading, hilma, fading, hilma But your face stays Remains the same
I face the wall of it all Only wish I could let you in Miya'rui dwach luminis For my heart is bitter, nothing
Red rimmed eyes A psychical disguise Gretch ma hitchi Be free from me
I face the wall of it all Listening for your call Sweet, sweet words echo Drowned in my sea
A sea of echoes
And I close my eyes, facing the wall of it all | |
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Sorcha The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 3858 Age : 32 Location : Netherlands Humor : You wouldn't want to know.. Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tarja, Delain, Marenne, Within Temptation, Epica. Member Points : Registration date : 2010-04-09
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:01 pm | |
| Really great lyrics | |
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