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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:41 pm

Amazing story, i really like it!
Oh and Finlandia vodka? It's some heavy stuff haha
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:47 pm

It's supposed to be based in Sippo (s.p?) in Finland. That being where the "victim" lives Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:48 pm

Sipoo Smile
I'm waiting for part two!
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:53 pm

I fail at spellings in Finnish you know that Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:54 pm

It's ok Smile
We got some really hard words i happen to know lol
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:11 pm

Yeah. English is a hard language for spelling too.

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:39 pm

You'll have to take a wild stab in the dark because you'll not get told thestory of this one.



The words sang
The words whispered
Oh so softly upon my cold skin
The sky is passing by once again
Your voice is in my dreams
Speaking distantly
Screaming in my head
Without words
And what if tomorrow never comes?
Will you leave me here, alone?
The mirror holds a broken reflection
Of me and you
No longer one
Just a seperate two
Could I live tomorrow without you?
Maybe the heat of the moment is what gets us through
What happens when the flame goes out?
What happens when the streams stop flowing?
And what happens when the rushing rivers re-open?
What happens if the dam was to break?
Would you drown?
Could you take me down?
My angel I must confess I'm lost
There's nothing here for me without you
For now I'm not moving from this spot
My treasure is you
Angel I must confess I do love you

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:40 pm

Stunning lyrics Tay!I can see deep emotion behind them.How long did it take to write?

And...
"Would you drown?
Could you take me down?"

Reminds be a bit of WT's Aquarius Wink And it fits Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:34 pm

love it.
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:48 pm

It took me 3 minutes to write Razz
I admit I was doing my love/hate thing again with it. I was acting on papranoia of something earlier which I assume was stupid of me now.

Thanks for all the kind words!

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:16 pm

Here's the final part to my story.

The Assassin (part 2.)

He feigned calmness as he entered her bedroom. A feint smell of expensive wine was warming him in the cosy room. The carpet was a bright white and shone in the dimly lit room. The walls were a deep red which matched the curtains closed over the windows and the drapes on the four-poster bed. Purple velvet bedsheets hung down onto the carpet. Beside that bed was a cabinet. Ontop of it was a lamp, which glowed softly. A door inside led to an en-suite bathroom.

He rounded the bed and lightly drummed his fingers on the cabinet. The sound of shaken breathing cam from beyond the drapes.

"Hush now Kirsi. Let us have a chat," he whispered.
"What do you want from me?" came the reply.

"Just to talk," he said in a sing-song tone.

Kirsi started breathing heavily; trying not to cry.

"Stop acting Kirsi. We aren't on set now," he said.

"What have I done?" she said in a half-whimper.

"Maybe we should ask Lady T. Does she ring any bells?" came the harsh reply.

Kirsi's mind started racing. She knew now what he had come to do.

"What's the matter? Cat got your tongue?" he said getting impatient now.

"I didn't mean it. What I did. Please." she said quickly.

"It's too late," he said almost sighing.

He whipped open the drapes and saw her sitting there, shaking like a leaf. Even her golden blonde hair was shaking. she held the covers around herself. Her huge blue eyes were streaming tears now. He felt a moments pity for her before getting out his rifle and shooting her through the head. Blood sprayed up the wall blending in with the paint. Her body slumped in the bed. He pulled out a handful of her hair and placed it in his pocket, for safe keepings.

He put away the rifle and calmly walked from the room. He ran down the corridor and jumped down a small flight of stairs. He sprinted down the remaining stairs and past all the house servants. Opening the front door, he ran and jumped over the fence. He could barely breathe before he got to his car. He climbed in and slammed the keys into the ignition. He slammed down hard on the accelerator and drove away.

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:53 pm

That is going to be good
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:58 pm

Part 1 is back another page. It's a complete short story Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:32 pm

Lyonesse

A spirit forgetten
Truth beneath the waves
A ocean of blue
A chest of truth
And she emerges


She is dressed in all the silks of her sorrow
Swimming in her tears
So fragile and transparent
Enter the night
She's gone forever

The ghost of her dressed in black
And the past is taking form with the future
To repeat itself again and again
And the mask of lies is pulled back
Leaving a beautiful emptiness

He is everything and more to be wanted
To be loved, to be cherished
Dressed in the essence of being
Singing to sleep with his voice
You turn and he's gone.. forever

The cold grass beneath my feet doesn't tickle
The sharp of the razor doesn't harm
The slap across the face leaves a mark but no pain
Days fade to gray and merge with nights
The sun devours the moon and the stars

A siren of the seas is calling me
So distant yet so close
Enchantment trapped
Yet she is here weeping, sleeping, dying
Within me

Is there a way..?

Oh I'm a slave, I'm a master
Held down by mental restraints
Something pulling beneath the voilent tide in me
Drowning me, freeing me

This isn't reall!
I can't let it be real!
This isn't reall!
I can't let it be real!

Yet the ghost in the fog embraces
The final ship has set sail
Everything so far away
The she in me grieves
Till there's nothing more

And she dies
He takes my heart and soul
I'd give it all to him

With the wind that blows so fiercly I struggle against her
But she's taking me down
Taking till there's nothing left

This isn't reall!
I can't let it be real!
This isn't reall!
I can't let it be real!

But it is..

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:20 pm

Geniously!I think this is by far your best poem!Congrats Tayla!!! Clapping
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:46 pm

WOW! Impressive, the last poem is amazing. good work Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Aug 07, 2009 3:01 pm

The best one! I love it! Clapping
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Aug 07, 2009 7:10 pm

Gawd that latest work is seriosly genious, you are truly talented Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:12 pm

Thanks everyone for the kind words.

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:16 pm

For Him I Wish
A very interesting piece youve got a real talent for this
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:35 pm

Amazing Smile Sorry I haven't commented recently, I've always had my last.fm list on, and it's hard to read with the music. I've probably told you a million times how talented you are, and you keep getting better and better the more you write.

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Fri Sep 04, 2009 8:21 pm

Thankies Joe and Todd Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:25 am

Fantastic job Tayla!
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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:26 pm

The Chalice

The Chalice
The Grail
The cup held in my bleeding hands
The goblet of which you greedily drink from...
Do what you want to me.
I forever yours.
Hold me...
Silently I will accept my fate
I have no love left within me
And she returns calling my name
Her voice so sweet and soft
Enchanting me

Come caress my thoughts
Come steal my heart
Drink from my chalice
Forever.. yours
My soul, my kiss
My love, my soul
Take me
Swallow me whole

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PostSubject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things...   Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:29 pm

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