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Universe The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4460 Age : 30 Location : Finland Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica, Mandragora Scream, In Silentio Noctis, Amaranthe, 2 Times Terror, HB, UnSun, Eilera, Darzamat, Kivimetsän Druidi, Villieläin, Depressed Mode Your Band Name : EneUniverse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:41 pm | |
| Amazing story, i really like it! Oh and Finlandia vodka? It's some heavy stuff haha | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:47 pm | |
| It's supposed to be based in Sippo (s.p?) in Finland. That being where the "victim" lives | |
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Universe The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4460 Age : 30 Location : Finland Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica, Mandragora Scream, In Silentio Noctis, Amaranthe, 2 Times Terror, HB, UnSun, Eilera, Darzamat, Kivimetsän Druidi, Villieläin, Depressed Mode Your Band Name : EneUniverse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:48 pm | |
| Sipoo I'm waiting for part two! | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:53 pm | |
| I fail at spellings in Finnish you know that | |
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Universe The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4460 Age : 30 Location : Finland Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica, Mandragora Scream, In Silentio Noctis, Amaranthe, 2 Times Terror, HB, UnSun, Eilera, Darzamat, Kivimetsän Druidi, Villieläin, Depressed Mode Your Band Name : EneUniverse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:54 pm | |
| It's ok We got some really hard words i happen to know lol | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:11 pm | |
| Yeah. English is a hard language for spelling too. | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:39 pm | |
| You'll have to take a wild stab in the dark because you'll not get told thestory of this one.
The words sang The words whispered Oh so softly upon my cold skin The sky is passing by once again Your voice is in my dreams Speaking distantly Screaming in my head Without words And what if tomorrow never comes? Will you leave me here, alone? The mirror holds a broken reflection Of me and you No longer one Just a seperate two Could I live tomorrow without you? Maybe the heat of the moment is what gets us through What happens when the flame goes out? What happens when the streams stop flowing? And what happens when the rushing rivers re-open? What happens if the dam was to break? Would you drown? Could you take me down? My angel I must confess I'm lost There's nothing here for me without you For now I'm not moving from this spot My treasure is you Angel I must confess I do love you | |
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XxfrozenbutterflyxX Treasure
Number of posts : 6329 Location : World of Glass Humor : Cry With A Smile :`) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica,Tristania & Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2009-03-06
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:40 pm | |
| Stunning lyrics Tay!I can see deep emotion behind them.How long did it take to write? And... "Would you drown? Could you take me down?" Reminds be a bit of WT's Aquarius And it fits | |
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Marit The Escapist
Number of posts : 1040 Age : 30 Location : Estonia Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Nightwish, Epica Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-11
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:34 pm | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:48 pm | |
| It took me 3 minutes to write I admit I was doing my love/hate thing again with it. I was acting on papranoia of something earlier which I assume was stupid of me now. Thanks for all the kind words! | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:16 pm | |
| Here's the final part to my story.
The Assassin (part 2.) He feigned calmness as he entered her bedroom. A feint smell of expensive wine was warming him in the cosy room. The carpet was a bright white and shone in the dimly lit room. The walls were a deep red which matched the curtains closed over the windows and the drapes on the four-poster bed. Purple velvet bedsheets hung down onto the carpet. Beside that bed was a cabinet. Ontop of it was a lamp, which glowed softly. A door inside led to an en-suite bathroom.
He rounded the bed and lightly drummed his fingers on the cabinet. The sound of shaken breathing cam from beyond the drapes.
"Hush now Kirsi. Let us have a chat," he whispered. "What do you want from me?" came the reply.
"Just to talk," he said in a sing-song tone.
Kirsi started breathing heavily; trying not to cry.
"Stop acting Kirsi. We aren't on set now," he said.
"What have I done?" she said in a half-whimper.
"Maybe we should ask Lady T. Does she ring any bells?" came the harsh reply.
Kirsi's mind started racing. She knew now what he had come to do.
"What's the matter? Cat got your tongue?" he said getting impatient now.
"I didn't mean it. What I did. Please." she said quickly.
"It's too late," he said almost sighing.
He whipped open the drapes and saw her sitting there, shaking like a leaf. Even her golden blonde hair was shaking. she held the covers around herself. Her huge blue eyes were streaming tears now. He felt a moments pity for her before getting out his rifle and shooting her through the head. Blood sprayed up the wall blending in with the paint. Her body slumped in the bed. He pulled out a handful of her hair and placed it in his pocket, for safe keepings.
He put away the rifle and calmly walked from the room. He ran down the corridor and jumped down a small flight of stairs. He sprinted down the remaining stairs and past all the house servants. Opening the front door, he ran and jumped over the fence. He could barely breathe before he got to his car. He climbed in and slammed the keys into the ignition. He slammed down hard on the accelerator and drove away. | |
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EnaGothic Countess Of Midnight
Number of posts : 4752 Age : 592 Location : Dracula's Castle Humor : Bwahahaha Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Nightwish Member Points : Registration date : 2009-01-02
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:53 pm | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Tue Jul 28, 2009 3:58 pm | |
| Part 1 is back another page. It's a complete short story | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:32 pm | |
| Lyonesse
A spirit forgetten Truth beneath the waves A ocean of blue A chest of truth And she emerges
She is dressed in all the silks of her sorrow Swimming in her tears So fragile and transparent Enter the night She's gone forever
The ghost of her dressed in black And the past is taking form with the future To repeat itself again and again And the mask of lies is pulled back Leaving a beautiful emptiness
He is everything and more to be wanted To be loved, to be cherished Dressed in the essence of being Singing to sleep with his voice You turn and he's gone.. forever
The cold grass beneath my feet doesn't tickle The sharp of the razor doesn't harm The slap across the face leaves a mark but no pain Days fade to gray and merge with nights The sun devours the moon and the stars
A siren of the seas is calling me So distant yet so close Enchantment trapped Yet she is here weeping, sleeping, dying Within me
Is there a way..?
Oh I'm a slave, I'm a master Held down by mental restraints Something pulling beneath the voilent tide in me Drowning me, freeing me
This isn't reall! I can't let it be real! This isn't reall! I can't let it be real!
Yet the ghost in the fog embraces The final ship has set sail Everything so far away The she in me grieves Till there's nothing more
And she dies He takes my heart and soul I'd give it all to him
With the wind that blows so fiercly I struggle against her But she's taking me down Taking till there's nothing left
This isn't reall! I can't let it be real! This isn't reall! I can't let it be real!
But it is..
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XxfrozenbutterflyxX Treasure
Number of posts : 6329 Location : World of Glass Humor : Cry With A Smile :`) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica,Tristania & Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2009-03-06
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:20 pm | |
| Geniously!I think this is by far your best poem!Congrats Tayla!!! | |
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Marit The Escapist
Number of posts : 1040 Age : 30 Location : Estonia Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Nightwish, Epica Member Points : Registration date : 2009-07-11
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:46 pm | |
| WOW! Impressive, the last poem is amazing. good work | |
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EnaGothic Countess Of Midnight
Number of posts : 4752 Age : 592 Location : Dracula's Castle Humor : Bwahahaha Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Nightwish Member Points : Registration date : 2009-01-02
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Aug 07, 2009 3:01 pm | |
| The best one! I love it! | |
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Universe The Heart Of Everything
Number of posts : 4460 Age : 30 Location : Finland Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Epica, Mandragora Scream, In Silentio Noctis, Amaranthe, 2 Times Terror, HB, UnSun, Eilera, Darzamat, Kivimetsän Druidi, Villieläin, Depressed Mode Your Band Name : EneUniverse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-09-15
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Aug 07, 2009 7:10 pm | |
| Gawd that latest work is seriosly genious, you are truly talented | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:12 pm | |
| Thanks everyone for the kind words. | |
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LindLTaylor Come Closer
Number of posts : 262 Age : 29 Humor : Melancholic Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Closterkeller and walls of Jericho Member Points : Registration date : 2009-09-03
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:16 pm | |
| For Him I Wish A very interesting piece youve got a real talent for this | |
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Wyld_stallyon Webmaster
Number of posts : 4659 Age : 29 Location : Peterborough Humor : "I love trigonometry" "Why" "Oh, you know... Just cos" Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Nightwish and Within Temptation Member Points : Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:35 pm | |
| Amazing Sorry I haven't commented recently, I've always had my last.fm list on, and it's hard to read with the music. I've probably told you a million times how talented you are, and you keep getting better and better the more you write. | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Fri Sep 04, 2009 8:21 pm | |
| Thankies Joe and Todd | |
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NocturnalConcerto Tristania Lover
Number of posts : 2775 Age : 34 Location : Gorizia, Italy Humor : The Sins Of The Beloved, Tristania Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Nightwish Member Points : Registration date : 2008-12-28
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:25 am | |
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Lady Draconian Pale Enchantress
Number of posts : 20598 Age : 29 Location : England Humor : ( . ) ( . ) Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Tristania, Closterkeller, Van Canto, Seduce The Heaven, Within Temptation Your Band Name : Sea Of Echoes, Carmella's Curse Member Points : Registration date : 2008-07-25
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:26 pm | |
| The Chalice
The Chalice The Grail The cup held in my bleeding hands The goblet of which you greedily drink from... Do what you want to me. I forever yours. Hold me... Silently I will accept my fate I have no love left within me And she returns calling my name Her voice so sweet and soft Enchanting me
Come caress my thoughts Come steal my heart Drink from my chalice Forever.. yours My soul, my kiss My love, my soul Take me Swallow me whole | |
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EnaGothic Countess Of Midnight
Number of posts : 4752 Age : 592 Location : Dracula's Castle Humor : Bwahahaha Your Favourite Femme Metal Band : Nightwish Member Points : Registration date : 2009-01-02
| Subject: Re: Tayla's Lyrics, Poem and Things... Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:29 pm | |
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