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PostSubject: DarthLand, now sanity free   Sun Jan 13, 2013 6:00 pm

Oi ! Oi ! Everyone !
Come here and enter a place where weird is normal and normal doesn't exist !
DarthLand is now open for you (Yes, you with the black shirt) and everyone else !
Well, maybe not you, yes, you there, don't run ! You know that I'm talking to you... *see the boy run into DarthLand* Well... I'm too old for that job.
Hum... Where was I ? Oh Yeah !
Fort those who ask themselves "What the heck is this place ?" The answer is... I don't know.
You know, I'm just here to sell tickets, I never go in there. I think there are some strange drawings and maybe some books, but note really sure.
Hey ! I've got a brilliant idea ! Why don't you buy a tickets and find out by yourself ?

So... That will be 2 gold per person, and 1 for the children.
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Psssst... If you're interested in more NSFW one, I think you can find some here.

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Sun Jan 13, 2013 6:15 pm

I saw some of your drawings/artsy stuff that you posted on twitter and I really love it! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Sun Jan 13, 2013 6:21 pm

Thanks, it's always good to read things like that. Embarassed
I mostly post them on twitter to get some quick critiques, because I'm really bad when I need to find my own mistake.

I'll try to translate some of my writing, but I think this will take some times.

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:25 pm

Very Happy Take as long as you need, it'll be great to read some of your works too!

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:28 pm

This is the first time that I try to translate one of my work, while trying to keep more than the essence of the text. So I hope you enjoy it.

For the context, this is the beginning of the story of the Vampire race in a world of my creation.


The Creation

It's in the depths of hell, specifically in the realm of Daedra that these creatures nor dead or alive come to life, if you'll pardon the expression.

Indeed, the lord of the underworld, with its failure with zombies, had initiated extensive research regarding the creation of an intelligent breed. Reinforced with bodies and freshly harvested creatures that began its creation. He began by putting the body in perfect condition in a state of stasis to prevent putrefaction; they no longer have the blood to maintain muscle in a good condition. Within a short time, he managed to find a system to compensate for this lack of erythrocyte, simply inspired by a category of bats. It should absorb 10 times their weight in blood daily to survive, so he added fangs to these beings still dead to allow them access to the bloodstream of their victim without too much difficulty.

At this body, he added strength, speed and a hunting instinct inspired from animals, allowing them to survive once in the world of Vaťtna. But he knew that dead bloodsuckers couldnít fit and would probably be hunt and eliminate, so he decided to give them beauty and charisma without equal.
Starting to run out of ideas, he took inspiration from other existing races and decided to add them magic, but a very specific form. In fact, he gave them what is called thaumaturgy, magic mainly based on blood and curses.

The preamble finished, he gave them a soul, but they were different, they seemed slightly corrupted by their presence in the underworld. Not caring about that, Daedra woke his children.

It was a total success, these creatures were alive and they walked, talked and even succeeded to think. Strangely, they seemed possessed of habits of the most unbridled, their nakedness does not embarrass them, sex seemed a simple way to experience pleasure and pain was a game. Although slightly stunned, the god of death found it amusing and decided that it should remain so.

And when the first of them came to him and asked, "Who are we?", The god of death said, "You are my children, you are ... Vampires!"

And so the story of this new race began on Vaťtna.


PS : I hope my translation isn't too bad.

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:40 pm

It sounds almost like a prologue to some gory horror movie. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:56 pm

Never try to wrote that style of text, but that could be fun.

If I can finish the French version of my story, I would stain to make a translation. And why not show you some passages, critics are always useful.

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Fri Jan 18, 2013 1:16 pm

Your art style is really cool! Some of those pictures would make awesome tattoos as well.

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Fri Jan 18, 2013 3:55 pm

Thanks !
And if someone ever want to have one of my drawing as a tattoo, that would be awesome. *.*

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Sat Feb 02, 2013 11:10 am

Well, a few days ago, I had the idea for a new project. The idea itself is very simple, it is to create the muses of Muses of Metal. Therefore young ladies representing the entire female population in all of their graces and styles while, of course, keeping the metal theme.

So here are the first two of the series :

This one was really in a "ghost" way :


And I made a bookmark of it :


I just finished this one, an Arch Enemy fan !

(It took me forever to find the idea of Arch Enemy, but I love it. *.*)

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Thu Feb 21, 2013 2:26 am

Well... A year ago, I start working with a friend on a fantasy/steampunk universe and recently, I had to redo some of my work to do some modification. The interesting point, is that one of my character I needed to made some change was named Tayla (don't remember why I named her like that, but it's a funny coincidence).
Therefore here's her story. (Well, there's two parts which are not there, but I'm still working on them, so maybe later)

The story of the baroness, Tayla Damhsa, started a little bit over 400 years ago. Her birth was an event as joyous as sad; indeed, her mother did not survived the birth.

Her birth occurred shortly after the one of the future prince, Darth; therefore, the two children were often together since their young age. The family Damhsa had to manage the club of the capital, so it was common that the young lady remains sleeping at the castle to prevent her from long journey too often. Over the years, Tayla developed some affection towards Darth; she adored to bother him, always trying to tear him a smile. Indeed, the life of future prince was not the most fun the moments they spent together was a rare opportunity for him to have fun. She was therefore convinced it was her duty as a member of the clan of Arts and spectacle to transform the life of Darth into a succession of fabulous show. During one of the shows, she decided to try singing a song she had composed herself, it brought tears to the young vampire. Seeing this, she began to apologize, thinking he cried because her performance was bad, but just when she started, Darth took her in his arms and assured her that he had never heard a voice so beautiful and implored her to never stop singing again. Thus, Tayla fully started singing, which therefore became her talent as Damhsa.

Then came her 14 years, age where like any other representative of the vampire race, she had to fulfil her military training. Her affection for animals and nature as well as her despite for war, she chooses the path of the hunter. Choices that proved most judicious, as the mastery of her voice allowed her to imitate the sound of animals with wonders. Her Weapons Master taught her then to live in harmony with her environment, and when she had to equip a weapon, it was the bow that she picked. Although reluctant to use it, her mastery was most satisfactory. But itís neither her voice nor her bow which made her the hunter she is today, itís her companions. Indeed, the future Baroness had created real relationships with all kind of animals which accepted the ghoulification with joy. As a result, when she returned from her two years of training, it was accompanied by a slew of animals of all kinds, from simple raven, majestic mare not to mention a massive boar.

Her return to the chant was, also, most dazzling. It was during the ceremony of return of the young prince after his own military training. The latter being at the forefront when she began to sing, scared to death. It was a triumph for the young vampire, the entire room cheered her performance, but it was not that she retained of this evening. Moments later, as the master of ceremonies invited Darth onstage for a speech, he merely climb on to say to the audience that heíll kidnapped the singer for the night, before catching Tayla to jump through the nearest open window. He took her to the center of the maze of flower, where they used to hide as child, and they spent the night telling each other story about their last two years. Before they realize the day broke and so their paths separate again. The young woman resuming her work within her clan, while the heir ensured semi-regency with his mother, the time his father returned from a diplomatic mission.
Unfortunately, very quickly, this peaceful life had come to an end. War with the Garou had started and they managed to foiled all of the defences. The Prince and his son were missing and presumed dead in the early battles, so it was Darth's cousin, Leodemant, who took the regency. The latter submitted to the Garou almost immediately, it was only a few years later that we learned he had betrayed his family, selling his people for the position of Prince. One of his first actions was to eliminate all those who dared to question his position, and the father of Tayla was one of them. The false prince allowed Tayla, who had just turned 18, to take the place of her father, but the latter should obey him without complaining. Barons and baronesses being now, no more than simple toys for Leodemant.

But the leaders of the vampire families were not going to let him do that easily. Tayla Damhsa, Evandri Onockjyn and Blake Technos decided to combine all three of their power to create a resistance movement. Very quickly, the other barons came to join them. Their goal was simple, to gain enough power to overthrow the prince and expel the Garou from their territories. During this period, two barons were eliminated for treason, greatly slowing the process. But an information came messing up the organization, the crown prince was still alive, in effect, one of the points of agreement between Leodemant and the Garou was that Darth become their object of torture. Upon learning this, Tayla demanded the resistance to saves the prince, saying that only he was entitled to occupy the position of leader and it was one of their duties to ensure its survival. Her relentless speech made quickly the round of resistant and convinced them. The organization being well organized, it didnít took them long before locating the right camp. The plan was simple; create a diversion sufficient so that the Garou canít torture the prince, leaving him the opportunity to escape. If he could not do it, that mean he had no longer the strength to fight, and therefore could not be their leader. The diversion was to let Damhsa clan, which used their mastery of the arts to amaze their audiences the time operations occurred, do a diversion. The Baroness herself would be the main attraction for this mission, her voice had become known throughout the country, her alone could attract enough people to allow Darth to escape without too much difficulty.

Several weeks had passed since the operation, but no news of the prince or a simple escape was advertised. It was a real blow to the morale of each resistant, but Tayla could not believe he could have given up, or worse he died. She still had to leave her hopes aside to resume the struggle with others. The power of resistance had indeed grown since its creation; it would take more time before they have enough strength to take back their country from oppression. But news came disrupt their plans, many Garou and Vampire patrols found massacred throughout the territory; the few survivors described the assailant as a demon straight out of hell. He had no mercy, killing anyone in its path. But more disturbing was the direction he seemed to take, indeed, he was going straight to the castle. Not knowing what was the thing responsible for this, the resistance still decided to take the opportunity to go on the attack. So while the mysterious assailant moved towards the interior of the land, they attacked the borders to prevent the Garou to send reinforcements. Taylaís unit was confined to the capital, to prevent Leodemant to escape his fate once the resistance has taken the country and also kill the attacker if necessary.

It took a week for the organization to fully impose their presence at the border. And it took as long for the creature to get to the gates of the capital. Taylaís order was simple, let the assailant reach the castle, ensuring no civilians being hit, and then discover its purpose to act accordingly. Without much surprise, the battle occurred once night fell, making the localization of this mysterious demon more complex problem which was reduced once the custody of the prince began to be put into pieces. The Baroness took mission to secure the most possible world, leaving the supervision of the castle to her subordinates with orders to send her a message when the attacker would be there. But the message she received was the strangest "Heís there. Problem solved. Think to bring food and drink when youíll come back. ". After abandoning the idea of completely understand the meaning of this message, she sent some members of his group sought provisions and set off towards the castle. Follow the progress of the assailant was simple enough; the bodies drew a real which get straight to the throne room. And the spectacle which occurred in front of their eyes was the most pleasant for the resistance, the lifeless body of Leodemant lying in a pool of his own blood. Behind this scene was the two members of the unit who had remained in place and a third one sitting on the princely throne, that Tayla couldnít quite see. Without thinking, she rushed to her soldier asking them what had happened before ordering this mysterious third to get his ass out of the seat. To which she received as response "It took me three hundred years to sit there, I'll stay a few more minutes ..."


Some clarification :
Garou : They're like lycan, werewolf, nekomimi... it's a half human/Half animal race.
ghoulification : the act of transforming someone into a ghoul, the kind you can find in "The masquerade". To put it in simple term, the creature (human or animal) start to admire their master and will do everything they ask.

And sorry for the names like technos, black... I'm not good to imagine that kind of things.

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Thu Feb 21, 2013 12:39 pm

What a cliffhanger to end on! Captured my imagination, and I really liked it.
Strange seeing my name in their though, strange coincidence. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Thu Feb 21, 2013 4:07 pm

Thanks ! And yeah, I don't remember why I choose your name, maybe that just after I started following you on twitter. I should check my draft, they must be somewhere on my desk.
I'll try to finishing it as quick as possible, should be done for tonight.

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Thu Feb 21, 2013 10:21 pm

And as promise, the end !


Tayla could not believe he was there in front of her, despite his body marked by injuries, she had recognized him without difficulty. The heir to the throne was back to demand his due. While she was still under the shock of the news, Darth stood up and took her in his arms. He looked at her with a smile, allowing her to see that his face was marked by imprisonment, as the rest of the visible parts of his anatomy. A slight shiver of terror had passed through the Baroness when she imagined what he had endured. Noticing this, the prince put his hands on her shoulders and says that she was still really pretty, trying his best to be as reassuring as possible. It was then that she allowed herself to smile, but she was still concerned about the real state of Darth. The news of the return of the latter passed through the country as quickly as possible, causing movements of revolt against the former oppressor in all the cities and villages. In just a few weeks, the territory was under the control of vampire and what better way to celebrate it than the coronation of the prince. Tayla was the first to devote allegiance to Darth, which decided the reopening of the Capitalís Club, which of course would be under the control of the Damhsa clan. The City of Arts and Entertainment being still in ruins and wanting to keep an eye on the state of the prince, the Baroness decided to take the position of manager of the club, allowing her to stay not far from Darth. Their freedom now resumed, the vampire nation demanded revenge, but against all odds, the prince announced that the priority was to bring back its former glory to the country, a decision that was not well received. But it was certain that three centuries of tyranny had left marks, most cities and institutions have been destroyed during the war and never rebuilt. And thus began a period of calm for vampires, at least on the surface...

As Baroness Tayla knew what Darth actually prepared. During his imprisonment, he had learned some information he intended to use to his advantage to show the Garou that the vampire nation had not forgotten. And they were not alone, the dwarves also had a score to settle and thatís on what counted Darth. So the prince went into the mountains to resume the old agreements and forge new ones. Within a few decades the vampire territory had changed completely, the capital was as resplendent as at its conception, the Ordersí buildings stood and were in working condition, and there was already talk of building plans of cities. But in addition to this, with the assistance of the dwarf, the army was armed and ready to fight. Fearing another betrayal, the prince had taken into confidence only the barons and the heads of the various orders, until the day that he addressed the people with these simple words "Revenge is a dish best served bloody ..." no questions was raised, everyone knew the reason for these words, the time of peace was over, the revenge, on the other hand, had just begun.

The Prince advocating that a leader must lead the charge to ensure that his subordinates follow, Tayla decided to take part in the battle as his aide. She could thus watch over him and accompany him on the battlefield to protect it. Unlike Darth which had taken up arms in his vendetta to regain the throne, the Baroness had not used her bow since the last war. This was felt at the first battle when she followed the prince in battle, she found herself quickly surrounded, and even helped by her animals, the number of enemy was consequent and they had an enormous power. Luckily, her leader had no intention of abandoning her. A roar of rage echoed on the battlefield, it was Darth which crossed enemy lines to join Tayla. He seemed to completely ignore enemy attacks, cutting and carving all those who were in its path. Once the side of the Baroness, he helped her rose, smiled at her before returning to the attack. This simple gesture filled with force the vampire which began to shoot her arrows at the head of her assailants, she even began to sing. Thanks to the relentless onslaught brought by the dwarves and vampires, every battle was a success and soon, the last Garouís bastion was in sight. Every vampire was ready to turn the camp into bloody nightmare; Tayla meanwhile had managed to convince Darth not to go into battle, at least, until the first squads have not managed to get to the walls. Unfortunately, while the assault begin squads of angels descended from the sky, acting as a shield for the Garou. At this point, nothing could hold Darth; the founder of his family was slaughtered by the angels during their "Purge", so resentment had always existed toward them. Tayla also throw herself into battle, snapping her arrows in the wings of the enemy to force them to fight on the ground. But vampires had no chance; they were repelled in just a few hours. Strangely, the angels were not aggressive, they were there to protect the Garou and apparently deliver a message of peace and unity. And as this war ended, now known as the Talionís War, a new era for the world of Vaetna started.

Soon after, peace was established between the various races, as well as a neutral country where every race would be represented. For Tayla, she returned to her position as manager of the Club, Darth having ordered rebuilding of the Damhsa familyís city, she has little time for herself, but she always try to keep an eye on her prince.


I'm not sure I'll keep this conclusion. Even if the idea is there, I find it slightly bad.

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Thu Feb 21, 2013 10:48 pm

Honestly, I really like it.
Though I am uncertain of the final conclusion as it is a bit abrupt. It's definitely a good piece of work though! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: DarthLand, now sanity free   Thu Feb 21, 2013 11:02 pm

Yeah, I should really change it.

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