Yotam's Cave of Creativity

Well I've been working on creative stuff (Mostly song writing and poetry) from time to time and I thought it might be nice to have your opinions I don't have a natural writing talent nor drawing talents and I'm not really good with metaphors or images so feel free to criticize me as much as your heart desire xD

Well here are the 3 short suicidal poems I wrote. They're named Sucide Poems (I,II,III) since I'm not good with names xP...
(Note: I'm not really that suicidal! It does not reflect any of my real current feelings. I just find suicidal, depressive and sad art beautiful and I connect to it somehow)

Suicide Poem I
Empty is the room
Like the void in my heart
Drunk from sorrow
And tired of life
Last farewell
Last goodbye
The rope surrounds my neck
It's time to die

Suicide Poem II
Drowning in gloom
Embracing my doom
So hollow inside
Yet overburdened
Salvation is in my hand
Aiming towards my head
I shall overcome my fears
By dawn I will be dead

Suicide Poem III
In my solitude
Darkness is my only friend
But soon life will end
Engulfing my death
One by one
This challenge is not for me
I'm done

I hope you like them
I've wrote some more stuff but I'm not sure if I want to upload them right now so... stay tuned I guess xD

They're very melancholic, sad. I understand what you mean that you connect more with sad art, I'm the same.

I love the first one
and you're qrong, it's really difficult to resume feelings in a short poem, that's talent